you have a really good grasp on space and movement which makes your pieces really interesting! i can't really tell from the picture if any of the collage pieces go off the paper. It doesn't seem like they do and that kind of bothers me. It makes it feel kind of choppy. If they do then just disreguard that comment ant this looks awesome
This is so sick! You have a lot of talent for collages :) It seems like the right side of the page is more connected and cohesive than the left side. I think the girl definitely draws the right side together and makes more natural movement throughout the piece. I wish there was something connecting the pieces on the left side of the page together. I can't exactly tell if there are pencil marks or something connecting them, but I think that might be a good addition. I also agree with Leah that having something coming off the page would add to it as well. It is very good though
i like the way you didn't take p the while page this tie. You used the space to your advantage, and i think the negative space adds a lot of movement. good work liz you're ze best
you have a really good grasp on space and movement which makes your pieces really interesting! i can't really tell from the picture if any of the collage pieces go off the paper. It doesn't seem like they do and that kind of bothers me. It makes it feel kind of choppy. If they do then just disreguard that comment ant this looks awesome
ReplyDeleteThis is so sick! You have a lot of talent for collages :) It seems like the right side of the page is more connected and cohesive than the left side. I think the girl definitely draws the right side together and makes more natural movement throughout the piece. I wish there was something connecting the pieces on the left side of the page together. I can't exactly tell if there are pencil marks or something connecting them, but I think that might be a good addition. I also agree with Leah that having something coming off the page would add to it as well. It is very good though
ReplyDeletei like the way you didn't take p the while page this tie. You used the space to your advantage, and i think the negative space adds a lot of movement. good work liz you're ze best
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